Drawn up Draft FC

Today I drew up my first ever magazine draft to get an idea of what it would look like round about. I decided to try out the name fresh however I am worried it sounds too young for my target audience and especially with the explanation mark. I think I want to try and keep with the same image on her, a close mid shot as I believe it will be most effective on my target audience. Purple may be the dominant colour I'm think white black and purple but will have to see. I know its early days and my drawing is terrible but bare with me!