Feedback Analysis Contents Page

My target audience have evaluated each page for me after my rough to help enable I make the perfect magazine specifically targeted at them. This time they were analysing my contents page. 


       Positives

• Neat and well presented 
• Nice font used on the contents page
• Very Clear

        Improvements 

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• Addicted to the mid shot, need to change my shots
• More colour needed
• Variety of backgrounds needed on the photos
• Too much white space- use a bigger font to help fill in the gaps 
• Make descriptions neater 

I will take all these comments on board and focus on filling in the spaces and taking new photos to help enable my contents page is at it's full potential.