Feedback Analysis Double Page Spread

Now it's time for my final target audience analysis of my rough cut. These are the comments I got back when they evaluated my double page spread.

          Positives

• Good distinction of fonts 
• Subtle colour used for the type of magazine you are trying to create
• Nice signature of the artist to add a personal touch towards the magazine
• Good breakout boxes
• Nice quotes by the artist 

         Improvements 

• Go around the image of the guitar 
• Missing punctuation and grammar in my article 
• More colour needed- could possibly focus on the guitar colour 
• Page details and branding of the magazine needed